I know my characters so well now that dialogue really flows—banter between Lei and her partner, Pono, interdepartmental meetings with Captain Omura, therapeutic phone calls with Dr. Wilson, Lei’s therapist, interviewing and depositions in different settings that are part of the investigation, and most of all, scenes between my protagonist, Lei, and her fiance Michael Stevens. Their bumpy romance began in book one and culminates with a possible wedding in this book!
I also have the steps and “rules” of a police investigation fairly well memorized, so plotting the scenes of the book is easy compared to when I first started writing police procedural and had no idea how police actually went about investigating. Now, hundreds of hours later, with friends and fans in police circles training, coaching, and reviewing my work, I actually think I could be a helpful addition to a homicide investigation, with my psychology background.
I also have confidence now that I didn’t have then. Confidence that, even though I don’t know what the “twist” at the end of my book will be, my brain will come up with one by the time I need it. Confidence that, whether everyone “gets” it or not, I’m doing a good thing with these books by shining an entertaining light on current society and Hawaii issues. Confidence that I can write a first draft within three months and get four books out in a year. Confidence that I can breathe life into even small characters, like the hippie lady with dreadlocks in the lime green Prius who helps Lei in Shattered Palms.
I have confidence I can give readers what they want, leave them satisfied and yet hungry for more—and to me, that’s successful storytelling.
Thanks for the friendship and support, Scott!Aloha

