I’ve been re-reading Raymond Chandler’s Philip Marlowe novels in a probably vain attempt to capture the mood and inspiration to write my own crime fiction, and when I compare Chandler’s prose to 21st-century mystery, thriller and crime fiction, it seems that Chandler’s challenge was less than today’s writers’—or at least, very different.
The Big Sleep was Chandler’s first full-length novel, and the first to feature the tough, cool and sarcastic private eye, Philip Marlowe. The book became a bestseller quickly, and I think part of the appeal was the titillation factor: Marlowe finds the daughter of his client drugged, sitting nude in front of a camera. In 1939, drugs and pornography was very racy stuff, stuff not talked about in polite society. So racy, in fact that in the movie version made in 1946, starring Humphrey Bogart and Lauren Bacall, that the Carmen character was wearing a “Chinese dress.” There was no mention of pornography, and the homosexual relationship of two minor characters was completely left out.
In a time when people make their own sex videos and publish them on social media, naked pictures are no grounds for blackmail. Today, it’s almost impossible to shock or titillate an audience merely by hinting at a character’s homosexuality.
Shockers sell books
New writers who reach bestseller status often do so with a taboo subject. The Girl with the Dragon Tattoo launched Steen Larson into international fame with its depiction of Nazis in modern society, child sexual abuse and a main character with Aspergers Syndrome. To Kill a Mockingbird wrote honestly about racism in the American South. The Virgin Suicides’ eponymous theme was something that no one wanted to talk about in the early 1990s. All these books were the first novels published by their respective authors.
The problem with shock as a literary device is it only works the first time. Writers of popular fiction have to keep upping the ante. Occasionally, I toy with the idea of writing a noir detective novel for the 21st century. Which means I would have to trawl the seedy underside of a big city and bring to light the dirtiest laundry of wealthy society, and the desperation of those clinging to the edge of their economic class.
But for shock value, it’s hard today to expose sins worse than what we read in the news: sexual abuse of children by clergy; self-proclaimed moral guardians having sex with strangers in public washrooms; institutional racism and sexism; wars being fought over made-up crimes. And of course, the biggest and most damaging sin of all: the manipulation of the economy to impoverish a once thriving middle class by transferring their wealth into fewer and fewer pockets.
How to shock?
I could probably dream up some horrible new crimes, something to surely shock or perhaps titillate an audience. Beyond the potential damage to my own psyche, I hesitate to inspire some twisted reader to emulate my fictional horrors.
And that brings up another question: should I write to shock? I write to tell stories, to present characters reacting to situations, not to horrify my readers.

Does the noir mystery translate to the 21st century? Sure. Plenty of writers have published these dark, moody mysteries with flawed characters who succumb to all sorts of temptations since 2000. But it seems to me that the crimes are grislier, the suckers more depressed, the gangsters more bloodthirsty and the femmes even more fatal.
Which means today’s noir writers are spending my psychic time in deeper, dirtier dungeons than ever before, writing about more damaging sins.
I was right. Chandler had it easy.
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Interesting post, Scott. You made some points I have never recognized, and I think you’re on target.
The inciting incidents for most of my thrillers come from news headlines; I keep a clipping file, and I don’t even use the most shocking ones. I still get an occasional review or email that mentions the amount of violence in my work, even though I tone down real life. It’s tough to imagine things that are worse than what’s in the news these days.
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Maybe crime and torture and shock are not what the world needs right now. Maybe the world needs characters who can give people hope in this dangerous world. I look for the writers who can provide such characters who survive intact the horrors of our current age.
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Preaching to the choir here. I am all about the shock-factor! No surprise there, though! Interesting your affinity for or love for noir… I have a very good friend, and well-respected filmmaker who loves everything film-noir. It’s certainly not a dying art. Have you seen the Jessica Jones series on Netflix? Comic book character done very noir-style.
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Yes, I’ve watched some of the Jessica Jones series. My older son is a big fan. I got a real kick out of seeing some of my favourite Marvel characters from way back in my day, like Luke Cage. And the Daredevil show on Netflix is also very noir, recalling the style of the comic from the early 80s. And those shows further underline my thesis: they’re way darker than the iconic “noir” films and books of the “golden age of noir.” The crimes are eviller and more disturbing, the characters are more damaged. So bringing the genre up to date is even dirtier. How dark can you get?
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Great post. I especially appreciate your desire to not write something that someone my try to emulate in real life. I like the old Perry Mason series. You know, the black and white version where yes a crime was committed but the victim was typically an evil person and right and wrong was actually all “black and white.” But that’s just me. More blood and horrific violence isn’t necessary to shock me or pique my interest.
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I personally avoid “shocking” stories that try to attract by blood, guts, and gore. The vampire and zombie books especially have become overdone to the point of sameness. Find another way to be an original and shock the world by your wit.
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Neat post.
“Where’s the line?” is a question I asked myself several times on my last novel. Did I really want to write about sex trafficking? Would any Christian publisher pick up a subject like that?
Sometimes though you just have to tell the story.
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Why wouldn’t a Christian publisher pick up a story about sex trafficking? It may not be an issue we are happy about, but it’s a real and an important thing.